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Ren Jones

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I've joined the bandwagon and finally done a character sheet for Ren.
This is her final design! She now has a ponytail and her eye shape has changed.
Thanks to =tansyuduri for kick starting me into gettting this done.
I had it sketched out for a long time, but I didn't want to finish it until I was 100% with how I wanted her to appear.

And now for the character bio!

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Name: Ren Marie Jones
Age: 20
Sex: Female
Height: 5'4" (she is short).
Eye Colour: Green.
Hair Colour: Blonde.
Profession: Freelance journalist in Central City. Reguarly has her articles published in The Central Times. In her spare time, she is attempting to compile a book about the Fullmetal Alchemist, and currently researches this in her spare time.
Family: Parents, divorced. Mother lives in a town outside of South City, working as a music teacher. Father is a General in the Military, stationed at Central Command. No brothers or sisters.
Hobbies: Writing, researching, reading and playing piano.
Love interest: Very good friends with a young officer called 'Smithy', who works in the Military.

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I will probably do a character sheet for 'Smithy' one day....

Comments appreciated!

Ren Jones & Artwork (c) =fantasysangel
FMA (c) The Cow :moo:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I realy like this OC. one thing that could be changed is her focus on Ed. I'd have her be working on other projects too. drawing wise I'd fill out her chin a bit in the face so it is not a flat line going down. Another thing I have noticed is that in general in fullmetal alchemist characters eyes shrink a bit in size as they get older. so posibly making her eyes a put smaller? Also if you are doing it in the style of the first anime the pupils tend to be smaller and the outline for the irises tend to be thicker. Over all this is a very nice peice of work.